Tuesday, April 8, 2014

"Emma said that I will never be happy in the future" .
This means that the person she very sad about her problems this her husband. he has been nucleating her and has made her feel bad about what is happening. the statement is true because she gets even more depressed when her husband has been missing for days now when he when fishing. this can be clearly be seen on page 79 on her Facebook post that she has been writing for example when she posted making comfort food when she got really worried about her situation. some of my thesis are that there are many problems like here personal life her life with her friends and the problems with her missing husband

1 comment:

  1. Great intro, but, not all sentences were clear. For example " This means that the person she very sad about her problems this her husband,". Your sentences are all in the correct sequence. You also gave some great details and you spoke in 3rd person. Your first point was that she had many personal problems, your second point was that she had terrible relationships with her friends, and last was your third point which said she was sad with the fact that her husband was missing. I would like to suggest that you revise your sentences for typos.

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